Never down,
Always up.
With reverence,
With approbation,
With veneration.
At my parents,At my brother,
At my elders.
I know the path will be paved,
The light will shine,
The star will rise,
Just have to look up
They're the ones
Who care for me,
Who give me passions and aspiring dreams,
Who will be there.
As I sit here,
I realize,
Always look up.
NIce! I really liked your topic and the way you wrote your poem and also the figurative language! Good Job!(by the way I am not in your blog roll group I am just commenting for fun)
ReplyDeleteHey Sumant!I like your use of vocabulary and how you use such descriptive words!Good job!
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Hi Sumant! Nice job, like the vocab!
ReplyDeleteI love this! So powerful! Really moving :)
ReplyDeleteI really liked. It was very powerful. Nice use of vocabulary.
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