It begins,
Palms are sweaty
Knees weakArms are heavy.
Then,
Glancing.
Panicking.
Butterflies are swarming,
Attacking you,
Eating you up.
Name...
Called.
Thinking...
Will be fine,
Will be awesome.
Realize...
It will be fine
It will be awesome.
Then gone.
With no trail left behind
Will be awesome.
Realize...
It will be awesome.
Then gone.
With no trail left behind
Hey Sumant!I really liked how you had short phrases and how you described so well!Great job!
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Sumant, loved the Eminem reference. Lose Yourself provided you with a pretty awesome introduction...
ReplyDeleteI liked it. Nice use of listing. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteI like how you have a transition going throughout the poem. I also like your reference to Eminem to give a better picture of the situation. Very clever.
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